You need to go through the text and get rid of the superfluous hard returns. Also, it would read better if it weren't all in bold.
One more: "ecologically raped" is incorrect; ecology is the study of ecosystems. Also the statement is totally unnecessary, since you also said it was exploited.
Buz Groshong - Feb 3, 2015 11:54 am - Voted 10/10
text clean upYou need to go through the text and get rid of the superfluous hard returns. Also, it would read better if it weren't all in bold.
One more: "ecologically raped" is incorrect; ecology is the study of ecosystems. Also the statement is totally unnecessary, since you also said it was exploited.